Level: elementary
Population:
Grade:
Engage: Teacher starts the class ask to students What type of letter
do they know or they write?. Then, the facilitator shows
some letters about places.After that, the students begin with
a short conversation describing a place where they went.
Study: Teachers shows a formal and an informal letter esplain the
struture and can you identify each one.
Activate: Students have to do a letter with the right fomr of a formal
letter, describing the most beautiful place you have visited.
contrast an compared
The porpuse of this report is to make a contrast of a formal and
informal report, and why I choose the model A, Giving reasons.
First, the report B is a formal letter because it is using aproppiate
vocabulary than the other model so, it would be a good letter for an
important person. The report A is informal, there's a common
language . This letter is more appropiate for a friend.
secondly, the grammar use in the frist report is lesser than the other
one. In this report you can find contractions, informal vocabulary and
the structure are not good. The report B have a good structure, the
grammar use are right, contain a sophisticate vocabulary and don't
have contractions.
Finally, it is very important know what a letter have, the structure and
for who is gonig to receive the letter.
To summarize, this two reports are good in the corret way.
I recommend to beware specially in accuracy (tenses) and range.
so, I believe that if you include a right use of those things you would
have a good report.
-The register of the report is formal; however, there are some contraction forms.
ResponderEliminar-The structure of the report does not have all the parts required with heading.
-There is accurate use of type of sentences with their corresponding punctuation.
-There are some of grammatical forms thta should be improved.
-The range of vocabulary can be more sophisticated for the audience and the proficiency level expected.
-The main body is divided in two sections each of which starts with a heading.
-Ideas are clearly linked with words and phrases.
-The conclusion needs to be improved by summarizing the points in the main body, makes a recommendation for future action, and offers a personal opinion.
-Indentation is needed.